北京
这是我的第一汉语【blog post】。
我会一点点汉语,所以我会写【for practice】。
今天我们在北京。我在酒店吃了早饭,然后我喝了冰咖啡和玩了电脑游戏。然后我们去了天安门【square】, 买了几个东西,吃了好好吃北京菜。北京很漂亮。
明天我们去【parks】, 吃【peking duck】。我喜欢北京。
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all the english words I don’t actually know yet, i’ll fill these back in and correct once I learn them.
feedback from 丈夫:
- 第一 → 第一个
- 喝了冰咖啡和玩了电脑游戏 → 喝了冰咖啡,玩了电脑游戏。its more natural to use a comma to separate these two ideas, same with the next sentence basically dont use 和 to connect ideas in the same way that you do in 英语。
- 好好吃 → 好好吃的
- 要去 when describing the future
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